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Counting The Seconds by ~love-that-kid:iconlove-that-kid:



It's been a year or maybe longer
Since I fell in love with you
I think of how we've changed a bit
But there's nothing I can do
It's been a month, give or take
Since you last talked to me
But just 3 weeks or even more
Now you ignore me fully
It's been a week or less than that
Since I last saw your face
A small smile but cold eyes
A look I can't replace
It's been so long, perhaps too long
I wish I didn't care
Two minutes since I thought of you
I just wish that you were there
©2006-2009 ~love-that-kid
:iconlove-that-kid:

Author's Comments

Sorry if I've already submitted this :P...

I was clearing out last years old school books and this fell outta the maths book. I don't really like it, I guess it doesnt apply anymore..

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:iconcunnucks-eh:
I like it ^^

It applies to me =P

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There's a fine line between love and hate. Love frees a soul and in the same breath can sometimes suffocate it...
:icontabbykitty:
I like the last three lines especially ^_^
:iconnoodle-soup:
I love it, it applies to me right now.. You just wrote down my thoughts exactrly :)

Awesome work hun

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
:iconkage-ichihashi:
I like that. Short and sweet. Keep it up; take care.

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Good things come to those who wait~ :love:
:icondamien-m:
GOD!! I love the last three lines in particular!! beautiful piece, luv!! good job!

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~Char Char

:glomp: Glomping, my favorite pasttime!!

"Anyone who thinks sunlight is happiness has never danced in the rain!"
-Unknown
:iconashice91:
WOW, cool poem.....even though you say it's old, I like it.....very well done!!! =P
:iconterminallytonguetied:
I know the feeling of finding records of long forgotten feelings:). They meant a lot before but are really just dead skin now.

I just love it how, as with all your poetry, you tell your story without any gaps. It's all there for anyone who wants to understand.
What talent you have, keep it up:blowkiss:.

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Omniscience is Overrated
:iconlaurenjerry:
god i can relate to this, perfectly...

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Funny thing about black and white. You mix it together and you get grey. And it doesn't matter how much white you try and put back in, you're never gonna get anything but grey.
-Lilah Morgan "Angel"
:iconknightpanthery2k3:
Sounds almost like what I am going through now.

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Love is like a bullet in the head,
What you heard is never what I said,
Love is like a bullet in the head,
What I wrote is never what you read,

-KMFDM/Skold, Love is Like

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