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Don't you ever miss her?
That girl in your dreams
You said you were in love with her
But that love was never seen
Yes, don't you ever miss her?
The only thing you can think about every hour of every day
And when they're triggered
The forgotten memories
Of fondness and smiles
Your song
Her song
My song
Our song
Gone
Don't you ever miss her?
You must
When you're all alone
And you hug your knees to your chest
And dream of her warmth
What her skin would've felt like against yours
How her voice would've sounded in your ear
It's gone now
But you miss her
Do you miss me?
©2006-2009 ~love-that-kid
:iconlove-that-kid:

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I dunno, my heads all over the place at current time

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:icongigglingtot:
yeah i think you hit the nail on the head with this one

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
:icon6tears:
gotta love this to death.

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I Don't Love You Like I Did Yesterday. So Now For The Cemetery Drive. They Built A Coffin Just Your Size. Cause Mama We're All Going To Hell.
:icondamien-m:
wow... *tear* i love it...

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~Char Char

:glomp: Glomping, my favorite pasttime!!

"Anyone who thinks sunlight is happiness has never danced in the rain!"
-Unknown
:iconlil-miss-ada:
I love it. I love the way it starts off as talking in the third person.. then slowly the first person insinuates itself in as well... very emotional. :+fav:
Ada

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:music: I've got a ticket to the moon
But I'd rather watch the sun rise
In your eyes.. :music:
:iconnoodle-soup:
Beautiful.. ah how i wish i could write like you

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
:iconlove-that-kid:
But you write beautifully! :)

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:heart: Maryanne
:iconnoodle-soup:
You too :) Thanx

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
:iconkage-ichihashi:
Amazing work as always. You truly make me think on your poems. Great job. Keep it up; take care.

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Good things come to those who wait~ :love:
:iconbeneath-the-leaves:
O_o *cries* it's so emotional and very touching, I recognize the feeling...

"You said you were in love with her
But that love was never seen"

again, *cries*

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"No matter how much this hurts, I wanted you to know my heart remains with you."

-"If All Else Fails", Matchbook Romance

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