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Heartache is a fun game
I like to play it when I'm lonely
When the dark presses in so you can hardly breathe

Sorrow is a sweet song
I like to listen when I'm lonely
Turned up so loud that you can't hear me scream

Fleeing is a pretty dance
I like to practice when I'm lonely
Run so hard and fast that it seems it's all I do

And "I love you" is such a simple phrase
I need to hear it when I'm lonely
When the hurt fills the silence- I've never felt so far away from you
©2007-2009 ~love-that-kid
:iconlove-that-kid:

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I'm actually quite happy at the moment, but a lot of people around me arent... I'm sorry :(

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:iconghelenestenar:
Aww it's... cute? I suppose not, but I really like the idea <3 It's really... affecting? how you compare the heartbreak, etc. to nice things. ;D

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'Are you the one I'm waiting for, or are you just an open door?'
=O I am all sorts of emo. Just not the types that are... well, emo. >.>
:iconbeneath-the-leaves:
I love how you took all those feelings and applied them to less happy things like dancing and games, and then went back to being melancholy. I love it so much and I feel like I can relate.

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"What you don't feel, you will not grasp by art." -Goethe



"Art is either plagiarism, or revolution." -Gauguin

:iconsilver-raindrops:
Aww... In both respects? The tone is really cute and innocent, sorta, but it's really deep and sad...;_; I love the metaphors~ :heart:

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I hope I look as cool as an ice-cold glass of APPLE JUICE!
:iconriseagainst89:
:cries: it's like you're speaking to me! I feel like I've known you my whole life! lol, not really, but this is beautiful, and I love it

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Cause fucking up takes practice--I feel I'm well rehearsed
:iconnoodle-soup:
I really love this

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
:iconlove-that-kid:
Thanks :D And thanks for the fav

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:heart: Maryanne

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