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You can't fill every silence with sinister glares
You can't spend every second pretending you care
You can't spend your whole life feeding people lies
Because I can see the truth when I look into those eyes
You can't expect me to care when your world falls around your ears
You can't expect me to help, to fight away your fears
You can't expect me to answer, to listen to your cries
Because I can find no light when I look into those eyes
©2006-2009 ~love-that-kid
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Just written after a small conversation... Good stuff conversations are.

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:icondamien-m:
eyes... the gateways to our soul... I love it!! Good job...

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~Char Char

:glomp: Glomping, my favorite pasttime!!

"Anyone who thinks sunlight is happiness has never danced in the rain!"
-Unknown
:iconlil-miss-ada:
Wonderful and touching. Well done.
Instant :+fav: :hug:
Ada

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:music: I've got a ticket to the moon
But I'd rather watch the sun rise
In your eyes.. :music:
:iconmistress-daye:
good conversation and gooc poetry things are looking up

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There is nothing to fear but fear itself........ well, and starvation we might all starve-FDR
:icondianax0lynn:
i like how you go through the eyes. pretty cool stuff :clap:

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bumble-bee tuna :rofl:
:iconquestiondot13:
i bet i can guess what conversation it was, lol.
conversations are very good, but that's what you get from being someone who can't shutup..
:iconxxacid:
I liked the rhyme scheme and yes like everyone else has said, great use of the eyes.
:iconglitterati:
Conversations are good stuff. And this was a good poem. I really liked the ending line. Thanks for the fav on Fleeting!

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It just glitter lust
:iconsnoangelbabe:
eyes are indeed the gateway to our souls. nicely done.

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